Wednesday, 2 August 2017

My bedroom description

This week we had to structure our descriptions. What we used was different writing frames,verbs and interesting vocabulary here's my piece



My bedroom. Overloaded by dirt and empty wrappers. Beneath my bed lays hair,bouncy balls and food crumbs that's the bugs can feast on It's like. Walking into my bedroom the first thing that comes to my mind is the pungent smell of  socks lurking around in the dark places of my room however the sweet sweet smell of lollies that I can’t seem to find, really does help that smell. The feel of my warm silky soft bed really makes me at home but in real it's just an average bed. Tapping on my Ipad is all you can hear along with the rain pouring down. Hanging on the walls are my year 4 painting and on the floor are books that I have yet to read. My room is my only secretary

Sunday, 23 July 2017

Speech judging sheet

Speech Judging Sheet

Name: Krish                           Topic: 3 ways on how to get a     
                                                    job                     
                   
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2           3           4           5
Structure

 
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.
4
Delivery

 
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.
4
Content
 
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.
3
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
3
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.
4

Next time I need to add factional information and powerful words.

Tuesday, 4 July 2017

Speech


I think I did well
Next time I should probably make a better connection with the audience

Monday, 3 July 2017

Speech


5 ways on how to get a job
Krish

Do you have problems with your life. Are you a very broke person well ladies and gentlemen here at Fuzzbeed I’m gonna tell you on how to get a job because you may think that it's one of the easiest things to do well let me tell you it's one of life's hardest jobs, get it cause you know… sorry but it sounded funny in my mind buuuut I guess not, anyway on to the first reason

And that’s find out background information about your boss. What this means is when you want to interview for a job find out what the person interviewing you likes and dislikes so you can pretend that you like what he likes and make a connection and probably get a job. But don't make the connection to strong or you might become best friends. Hmm... I wonder what will happen if you get caught because you lied and don’t like what he likes maybe he will hate you or.. Oh sorry about that anyway my next idea is

Be the dream employe your boss wants. This means act like your boss wants you to act which could mean you might have to wear a suit and tie and work 24 hours a day but hey wouldn’t you get out of your comfort zone for money cause if you wouldn’t then you got them problems and you better get to a doctor real fast hmm… what if you mess up and they fire you.. Oh sorry again I really do doze off at bad times anyway on to my last idea thats

Never Give up and you should all know what this means but if you don’t then let me explain with an example imagine you were in an interview and you didn't, (pause) wait a minute are you even imagining, hey don't laugh tony you weren't imagining either anyway back to the where I was oh yeah so imagine if you just got interviewed for a job and you didn’t make it what would you do, give up, or try again i'll give you time to decide… okay times up let me tell you the answer try again cause if that's what you picked then you're ready but if it’s not then take you time.

Now that you’ve heard all the different ideas on how to get a job I have a Dream that all of you will succeed in life and all of you will once again and make society wait that's too small I mean neighborhood nah maybe world yes world anywho back to my speech. And you will all make the world great again oh I have a dream that every single one of you will not be shamed but will be loved by your families again, and now that you have a job it’s time for me to get one to.




Wednesday, 21 June 2017

Key Competencies Semester 1



Key Competencies
(the capabilities required for living and lifelong learning)

Halsey Drive School
                    A = Almost Always
                                                               S = Sometimes
                                                          N = Not yet
1st half of the year
2nd half of the year
Student
Teacher
Student
Teacher
Managing Self

I am organised for the day
S
A


I am willing to try new things
S
S


I complete work to the best of my ability and show initiative
S
S


I begin work straight away, stay on task and work independently
S
A


I can set realistic goals and explain how to achieve them
A
S


I make sensible behaviour choices
S
A


I happily take part in all school activities
S
S


Relating to Others

I cooperate well with others when working
S
A


I treat others with respect
A
A


I am a good friend and role model - especially at break times
S
S


I show good manners and cooperate with others
A
A


Participating and Contributing

I share my ideas and opinions with others
S
S


I listen well to other people’s opinions
A
A


I take part in activities outside of the classroom
A
S


Thinking

I ask relevant questions to deepen my knowledge
A
A


I reflect on my own learning and say what I need to learn next
S
S


Language Symbols and Texts

I use a range of IT to share my learning
A
A




Tuesday, 20 June 2017

Car That Runs On animals


Description- My car runs on static electricity. How this works is the hamster on the top keeps running around the wheel and that rubes on the balloon witch then creates the balloon to rub on the car to make electricity


Reflection- I liked my idea on a car running on animals however I think next time I should probably make the car look better and add more colour

Sunday, 21 May 2017

argument about camp

WALT to write an successful argument

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We should be allowed to bring devices to camp


Ideas


  • You can communicate with your parents.
  • You can take photos and show what's been happening.
  • If raining you can use your device to do something entertaining.
  • If you can’t sleep you can quietly play until you get sleepy.
  • You can talk to someone that is in a different room like your friend and a lots of other things.
  • finish work so you won’t have to catch up later.
  • You can use it to see what has been happening.
  • On the bus trip there we can stay entertained.
  • You can stop talking on the bus as much.   `
  • If you get car sick you can get distracted by the device.
  • When someone gets a sore we can get distracted.
Intro
It’s almost camp, we may come back looking like a tramp, why have the teachers have banned, ‘DEVICES!?’ we rant.  
As you may know we are not allowed devices at camp this year, we are even more sad that it is near, so this is our argument, to the Halsey Drive School Parliament. Devices should be allowed at camp.


One reason we should bring devices to camp is if anything special happens and you want to share it with your family you won’t be able to as cameras don’t have that option. What if you have relatives overseas? they won’t be able to see your photos unless you go over there to show them, but if you have a phone you can just send it to them via social media


Another thing we could use it for is, If we feel homesick we can communicate with parents without having to make a teacher call home. Be honest, I’m sure you don't want kids coming to you just to say, “I'm sick, can you call my parents.”  This would help a lot especially at night and you won't have to worry about a child waking up, they can just access their devices and call their parents telling themselves and not disturb you. But don’t worry, you have my permission to take them off us if it’s too late so we're not too tired for the next day's activities.


If we were aloud to bring devices on the bus to camp we can entertain ourselves on the way there by watching things like netflix and other movies and we can prevent ourselves from talking too loud so the bus driver can drive safely and won't crash.


To reiterate,  I think it is essential that you are allowed devices at camp. You’ll be distracted on the long bus ride leading to a happy bus driver and also a safe trip.  Second of all, you won’t have to get up in the middle of the night to ask your teachers to call your parents. Instead you can use your device and keep your teachers and the MERC staff enthusiastic about teaching us. Last of all, we think that if any exciting or legendary events go on, we can take photos and videos to share with our curious families and friends.  Overall we think that it is essential that we be allowed to bring our devices to camp. I wonder if they’ĺl allow us to bring an Imac?       
           
By Aryan, Krish, Ansh and Haoran